Kia ora Elizabeth, my name is Leah Maree and I am one of the year eights. I love the story you wrote and the picture is very pretty. The rainbow dress sounds very pretty and I wish I had one.You have done a good job with you full stops and capital letters. Keep it up.
Very cool drawing, your writing is descriptive and interesting. Your handwriting is progressing fast.
ReplyDeleteI love how your picture shows the curly hair and the dress
ReplyDeleteKia ora Elizabeth, my name is Leah Maree and I am one of the year eights. I love the story you wrote and the picture is very pretty. The rainbow dress sounds very pretty and I wish I had one.You have done a good job with you full stops and capital letters. Keep it up.
ReplyDeleteHi Leah-Marie thanks it was fun writing!
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